| Re: [m2m-iwg] Draft press release |
Ian, all, The draft really is looking good, thanks for your work on this Ian! I have attached an updated version with a few tweaks to try to introduce the M2M model notion, and how it enables the creation of a larger M2M framework. As discussed during some of the marketecture calls, our concern was that talking about an "M2M framework" upfront might be a bit too vague. The reworded second bullet point hopefuly clarify what the m2m framework is actually made of… Regards, Benjamin. ________________________________________________________________________ De : Ian Skerrett <ian.skerrett@xxxxxxxxxxx> Répondre à : m2m Industry Working Group <m2m-iwg@xxxxxxxxxxx> À : "m2m-iwg@xxxxxxxxxxx" <m2m-iwg@xxxxxxxxxxx> Objet : [m2m-iwg] Draft press release
All, Attached is a draft press release that I would like to distribute on May 24. I would appreciate any feedback on the release by May 14. The release specifically mentions the participation on Eurotech, IBM, Sierra Wireless and Band XI. I'd like to have those companies, okay for their names to be included in the release. I'd like that approval by May 17. Thanks Ian -- Ian Skerrett VP of Marketing and Ecosystem Eclipse Foundation Tel: 613-224-9461 ext 227 Blog: ianskerrett.wordpress.com Twitter: IanSkerrett |
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