Re: [ptp-dev] New downloads page for Kepler - description of Parallel Pa

[Roland Schulz <roland@xxxxxxx>]

On Tue, Jun 11, 2013 at 6:08 PM, Greg Watson <g.watson@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
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> On Jun 11, 2013, at 10:59 PM, Roland Schulz <roland@xxxxxxx> wrote:
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> On Tue, Jun 11, 2013 at 5:11 PM, Beth Tibbitts <tibbitts@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
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>> That won't fit. it will get truncated.
>> It should fit in two lines of about the same length as what I wrote below.
>> Or else, the *first* two lines of that should be what we want to show.
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>> Approximately this size, based on what fits now.
>> (Note that it will be right under the title "Eclipse for Parallel
>> Application Developers" so i'm omitting those words here.)
>> Wordsmith this:
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>> Tools for  C, C++, Fortran, and UPC, including MPI, OpenMP, OpenSHMEM and
>> OpenACC.
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>> Parallel Debugger. Remotely build and monitor apps on a broad range of
>> target platforms.
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> I would suggest to remove "on a broad range of target platforms". I suggest:
> "Tools for C/C++, Fortran, UPC, MPI, OpenMP, OpenSHMEM and OpenACC
> developers.
> Remotely build, execute, debug, and monitor parallel apps."
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> Why? We do support a broad range of platforms.
Yes it isn't wrong. I just don't think it adds much - because it is
rather unspecific (e.g. whether the target OS is meant or the RM or
what). So I think the very few words available can be used better.

Roland

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> Greg
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