Re: [eclipse-pmc] Please approve Orion 3.0 release review documentation

[Daniel Megert <daniel_megert@xxxxxxxxxx>]

+1.

Some minor issues:
- "end date" (Wednesday, June
12, 2013) is a bit confusing. Is this the date of the review, or the due
date of the material? Or the date of the release?
- and for those consuming Orion in applications
or product.
        ==>
and for those consuming Orion in applications or products. OR: and
for those consuming Orion in applications or a product.
- Orion continues to work on the Scalability
of the Server
        I
could not find "Scalability of the Server" as theme on the plan,
so, I guess it should read: Orion continues to work on the scalability
of the server
- The Orion UX experience has been improved

        UX
already stands for user experience ==> The Orion UX has been improved

- There are no features that are EOL
        needs
a dot at the end
- There are numerous specifications
Orion participates in including:
        deserves
a comma ==> There are numerous specifications Orion participates in,
including:

Dani

From:	Wayne Beaton <wayne@xxxxxxxxxxx>
To:	eclipse-pmc@xxxxxxxxxxx,
Date:	06.06.2013 21:45
Subject:	[eclipse-pmc] Please approve Orion 3.0 release review documentation

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Greetings Eclipse PMC.

Please review and approve:

http://projects.eclipse.org/projects/eclipse.orion/reviews/3.0.0-release-review

Thanks,

Wayne
-- 
Wayne Beaton
Director of Open Source Projects, The
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